LETTING GO Shawna Story eBook RJ Kenzie
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After falling in love with a wealthy young man, Shawna Watkins believes she has found what she's been searching for in life. A handsome fiance, a beautiful home, and a wonderful new life.
She takes it all in stride, unaware it also comes with his conniving mother, Katherine, and she will do anything in her power to rid Shawna from her son, Conrad's, life. Struggling to attain all of her dreams, she has no idea that her life will fall apart when hidden truths come to light.
Pregnancy and having your first child should be a beautiful moment in a woman's life, but that is one thing she will never experience. Alone and pregnant at seventeen, with no family or support, Shawna's life has been turned upside down.
She now has a big decision to make, for her and the well being of her unborn child. Will she make the right one?
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LETTING GO Shawna Story eBook RJ Kenzie
the lame ending where all these people with huge problems solve them all and live "happily ever after." And not just ordinary happy, but spectacular happy, perfect lives with never another problem! Also, the two heroes purposely destroy an old lady's life -- simply because they don't like her -- and they're still the heroes! How ludicrous is that?But my big problem was the awful distortion of the English language and punctuation. I have read about 80 kindle free or less than $4 books, and although this was a problem in most, it was never bad enough for me to complain about, till now. It is that bad.
"He wrapped his kissed the side of her forehead." Yes, that was a sentence. What does that mean? There were words left out and words added where they shouldn't have been. English is obviously a second language for this author. This is fine if you have it proofread. One glaring weakness was the author doesn't know the difference between "that" and "who." This type of sentence occurred perhaps 50 times:
"I glanced at Amber that was still glaring at me."
"I glowered at Theresa that went scurrying behind her."
"I looked at Jenny that rolled her eyes."
"WHO," author! "WHO," not "THAT." Who refers to people; that refers to things!
So in a two-book series of about 1400 pages, irritation and frustration accompanied the experience of reading a good story. I would have read some more of this author's books if it were not for this major annoyance.
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LETTING GO Shawna Story eBook RJ Kenzie Reviews
Letting Go was definitely not what I was expecting. I loved all the twists and turns this book had in store for the reader. Just when you thought the story line was going to go one way, the author managed to completely turn it somewhere unexpected...which usually left me with my mouth open in shock because of what happened. I couldn't get enough of this book and read it rather quickly. Great author--definitely reading more of her work!
Letting Go and Holding on--two of the best kindle books I have read. Story line and character development kept my eyes glued to these books. I found the "happy ever after" and "friends in the end" a bit unrealistic, but just a bit. I read both books twice within the same week--and probably will reread both again this year.
I luved this book! Because the the story is so incredibly riveting, I finished it in three days and just couldn't putting it down. I enjoyed the character development and the storyline moved at just the right pace. The story's themes will provide young woman/girls with inspiration and hope . Dominos is a fantasic storyteller and I look forward to finishing her other books.
*Luv is used to describe my deep fondness for inanimate objects.
This is one of the most ridiculous books that I have ever read. It doesn't seem as if the author understood very much about the way the world works at all. One of the main characters became a lawyer right after graduating college (it doesn't seem as if the author knows about the existence of law school) and another main character is given full scholarships and acceptance letters from two different colleges from a high school teacher without even applying to either college. The mechanics of adoption are also presented really fuzzily. There are open adoptions available -- it doesn't have to be the way the author presented it. You also just can't terminate a father's parental rights without giving a child up for adoption -- but I guess a lawyer who didn't go to law school can't be expected to challenge that.
Aside from the facepalm-worthy factual errors, this book is just tedious to read. Shawna is so thoughtless and dumb that she brings the vast majority of her problems upon herself. The other characters are just like cardboard cutouts surrounding her. Conrad and his mother are too evil to be believed and the various friends that Shawna makes along the way are just too good to be true while also inexplicably falling by the wayside when she actually needs help.
Nobody really talks or acts like a real person. It was unclear why Conrad wanted a family so much and why he had to have a sixteen-year-old as his girlfriend. It was also unclear why Shawna would go along with this when she love him so little that she fell for the first guy who asked her out on a lunch date.
Everything about this book is purely ridiculous. Even if the editing issues were fixed, it isn't like reading a book set in the real world. I would only recommend this for hardcore readers of woe-is-me fiction who will accept a massively unrealistic tacked-on happy ending. Everyone else should avoid.
DOMINO did a fantastic job in creating a novel that manages to touch hearts.
Breif summary
The novel starts off in the middle really, where Conrad and Shawna have had their main problems and things were looking more bleak then ever. Shawna goes over everything that led her to the place where she was at, including leaving the man she had fallen in love with - who accepted her and the baby - to go back to Conrad so he could have both his biological parents. After making a heart wrenching decision, things start to come together. The novel ends rather happily, despite it's overly depressing beginning.
I cried many times during this novel, I don't think I've had a book touch my heart quite as much as this one. It was a one sitting read, and I'm normally not a fan of the pregnancy type novels.
It could have had less chapters, as in they could have been combined, thinking a book has 70 + chapters seems very excessive to me. Also, there were some very simple typos like ruff, tuff,thru, etc...
Other than those simple things, it was beautiful. Be prepared to run into many curse words though - so if you can't handle that I wouldn't suggest reading this. It was very true to how someones life could be and the situations they may run into as an unprepared teenage expecting mother.
the lame ending where all these people with huge problems solve them all and live "happily ever after." And not just ordinary happy, but spectacular happy, perfect lives with never another problem! Also, the two heroes purposely destroy an old lady's life -- simply because they don't like her -- and they're still the heroes! How ludicrous is that?
But my big problem was the awful distortion of the English language and punctuation. I have read about 80 kindle free or less than $4 books, and although this was a problem in most, it was never bad enough for me to complain about, till now. It is that bad.
"He wrapped his kissed the side of her forehead." Yes, that was a sentence. What does that mean? There were words left out and words added where they shouldn't have been. English is obviously a second language for this author. This is fine if you have it proofread. One glaring weakness was the author doesn't know the difference between "that" and "who." This type of sentence occurred perhaps 50 times
"I glanced at Amber that was still glaring at me."
"I glowered at Theresa that went scurrying behind her."
"I looked at Jenny that rolled her eyes."
"WHO," author! "WHO," not "THAT." Who refers to people; that refers to things!
So in a two-book series of about 1400 pages, irritation and frustration accompanied the experience of reading a good story. I would have read some more of this author's books if it were not for this major annoyance.
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